Thursday, August 2, 2012

My Short Short Story for the Day



Quinn raced across the ground dodging the swirling circles focusing on the other side.  Almost there she thought as she moved swiftly, stepping with great care.  Just a little further and I’ll be safe.  This was a test of agility but even more so of bravery.  She knew she was quick and clever.  Her father had taught her everything and praised her for being such a good student.  She knew she could do it but the tingle of nervous excitement filled her belly.  Finished!  Her father hugged her tight and the crowd cheered.  She looked to her mother in the stands and saw the relief ease the tension in her face.  Her mother waved then quickly brushed the tears from her cheek.  Her baby had made it safely across.  Father had tried to assure her the night before but Quinn was her baby, the last child to take the test.  After today, she wouldn’t have to suffer this heart wrenching anxiety anymore.  Suddenly there was a commotion in the arena.   Saber had almost finished his turn but something had happened.  He was teetering on the edge of a swirl.  Quinn reached out stretching for her best friend’s hand.  She didn’t think, didn’t hesitate.  She had to help him.  Their fingers locked and she pulled.  It looked as if he would right himself but suddenly the swirl shifted and sucked him in.  Time stopped for an eternity of an instant as Quinn’s eyes locked onto her father’s. 

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