What do I do? Melanie thought as she
walked slowly down the deserted sidewalk. She loved the quiet of the
early morning. It was her favorite time of day, walking and thinking
about all life's...adventures. Like Kirk. She loved him but just
wasn't sure she was ready for such a big commitment. They'd been
together for a few years and he had asked several times, but she just
couldn't bring herself to say yes. Her mother had given up long ago.
She did manage to throw in from time to time how much she wanted
grandkids. Melanie laughed. Someday, she would say. Some day. Oh,
Kirk. He was so sweet and patient but...but... What was it that was
holding her back? If only she could figure it out. Her friends all
liked him, her parents liked him, his family liked her, his friends
liked her. What was it? Melanie tried to pinpoint the cause of
hesitation when suddenly she was thrown into the air. She didn't
feel any pain, just the strange sensation of air rushing past her as
her body took flight. There was a loud thud echoing in her ears for
several minutes as she stared up into the clearest blue sky she'd
ever seen.
“Yes, please hurry...”
All sounds faded into the distance as a
rush of peace came over her. She didn't fight the overwhelming urge
to close her eyes. Warmth spread out around her as her breath
slowed. Now, everything became clear. All the questions, all the
uncertainty, all things. It was so easy now to see what she needed
to do. Soon, just a short rest, then she'd talk to him. Soon.
Loved this. Raw and realistic. And the ambiguous ending...
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